你这样说话未免太直接了。

Nǐ zhèyàng shuōhuà wèimiǎn tài zhíjiē le.

What you said is a bit too direct.

他刚来公司就要求升职加薪，这个要求未免有些过分。

Tā gāng lái gōngsī jiù yāoqiú shēngzhí jiāxīn, zhè gè yāoqiú wèimiǎn yǒuxiē guòfèn.

He just joined the company and is already asking for a promotion and a raise; this request is somewhat excessive.